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Overthinking, overmodulated. Sounds like disjointed cut/paste plagiarism.
Too much blah-blah and meandering repetition.
Do you even fish?
If you want to write ad copy, you have to learn to get to the point:
1. capture attention and name your product
2. feature, feature .... benefit
3. call to action
Who, what, when, where, why, ... and how much
Good luck! Go sell more kayaks!
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Last edited by Mr. NiceGuy; 07-19-2018 at 10:32 AM.
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